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Isaac
25th Aug 2008, 11:58 PM
If I could write what I could feel, then endless the pages would be, if I could see what I feel, I could stare through the world and into the next, if I could hear what I have feel then burning with the echoes from space I could hear, if I could taste what I feel then numb thy tongue would go, if I could smell what I feel no scent again would fill thy soul and if I could touch what I feel then forever would it be in my heart. Sadly I don’t know what it is I feel or that whish I have felt, but I know it is not love, as I am still waiting for that.


(thought I would post this, if you like it there are more in my blog, I add to it all the time. Thanks for the comments, and opinions, the more the better :) )

Jim1454
26th Aug 2008, 02:59 PM
Deep. I liked it! Thx.

Fiorino
27th Aug 2008, 03:55 PM
I like it!! Keep up the good work!
:eusa_clap

Mind Freak
27th Aug 2008, 04:08 PM
That's pretty nifty!
I like that word... nifty. Lol.

I'm not very good a poetry, I've always admired people who were though. : )