So I graduate college soon and this is a poem I just wrote about my friends. They have been by my side through everything. I know it's not that good, I'm not usually big on rhyming either, but just wanted to share. Any constructive feedback is also appreciated:icon_bigg Three years of struggles, triumphs and fun My time at college is nearly done Many hardships here I have faced Perhaps not handled with ease and grace I've struggled, I've cried, so many times I just wanted to hide This is to everyone who picked me up when I fell down The people who made me want to stick around You've listened to me rant, ramble and cry But never once did you leave my side There’s a reason I am still alive And it’s you You my friends You've been with me through my aches and pains You are the ones who kept me sane You made me laugh when I wanted to cry You made me smile when I wanted to die You've been with me every step of the way It’s because of you I’m here today Despite my troubles, my struggles, my tears You have made me realize, I have nothing to fear I am stronger now than I was before I have so much that I am grateful for As time goes on and we part ways I really hope our friendship stays You all mean more to me than words can say Please, let us meet up again one day?
I love it. I agree with Radlesbian15. Your friends are lucky to have you as their friend. (*hug*) I don't have any criticism to offer though, but I'm not good at that anyway. :icon_sad: Mouse.