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Should I finish any of these?

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by thesharkamander, Dec 26, 2013.

  1. thesharkamander

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    Sometimes I like writing songs. None of these at finished, and I know they're not perfect, but... I had fun writing them?

    "Fire"
    There's a fire,
    In the night,
    And it keeps me on my feet,
    So I'll keep trying,
    'Till I'm finding
    What it means,
    It means to me.



    "Shoulder to Cry On"
    I'll always be your shoulder to cry on,
    Whenever you are feeling down,
    And I'll always be someone you can count on.
    I promise I'll always be around.



    "Shooting Star"
    I'll light up the night,
    Like a shooting star.
    Burning so bright,
    Like a shooting star.



    "Dark Right Now"
    I just need a flash of hope,
    A flame of light,
    To save me from this endless night.
    Just take my hand,
    Just be my guide,
    Just stay here at my side.

    It's so dark right now,
    And I just wanna break out
    Of these chains that hold me down.
    It's so dark tonight,
    I'm losing this fight.
    Would you help me find myself?
     
  2. Mirko

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    I think it would be awesome if you were to finish writing them. I really like the lyrics with which you have started the songs. :slight_smile:
     
  3. thesharkamander

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    Thank you. :slight_smile:
     
  4. musicrebel

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    You should finish writing these! I think the lyrics are wonderful :slight_smile: I write songs too and I always have these great songs started and I don't finish them ever haha! These are great :slight_smile:
     
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    I like "Fire" a lot. Definitely keep going on that one. Do you have any of the tune figured out yet?
     
  6. Z3ni

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    You should finish them all
     
  7. thesharkamander

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    I have the tune for the part I posted, but I'm not sure how the rest will go.
     
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    Yes please! I would love to see the rest ^_^
     
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    I love Shoulder To Cry On :slight_smile: it would be best if we can get to know the tune :thumbsup: