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30th Jun 2008, 07:55 PM
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| True as Blue Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: whomever cares enough to know Location: Illinois Age: 22 Posts: 647 Join Date: Jun 2008 |  Something I wrote... I wrote this just a minute ago, thought id share it, see what you guys think. It's called Toy I知 a wind up toy Just wind me up and ill do your bidding Ill entertain, ill talk, ill laugh, even sing Until you get bored of me, and my gears slow down I知 left alone in the dark, cold and afraid Waiting to be wound up and happy again 3 days later I知 noticed once more Finally, I get to be happy over again You wind me up, I dance and sing Thought my voice hits a glitch, and a note is off key This makes you mad; I知 of no further use So you throw me away, until it痴 the next time to play My winder has broken off, I知 no longer complete You can see all inside me No heart that breaks No soul that can be crushed Just a bunch of gears winding For the next time I give you everything And you just discard me once more.
__________________  "Haven't you heard? I'm the crazy bitch around here." (Blair Waldorf ~ Gossip Girl) I am human and i need to be loved...just like everybody else does |
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30th Jun 2008, 08:00 PM
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| Steven Brightside Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Friendly Out Status: A lot Location: Virginia Age: 20 Posts: 1,091 Join Date: Feb 2008 | Re: Something I wrote... That's kinda creepy. Like... that's not helping my past hoarding instinct.. I'm over it but still, .. haha.. you're funny. HAHA, sorry, that was off topic That was actually fun to read. I liked it.
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30th Jun 2008, 08:18 PM
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| ♥♥EC's Resident Hippie Child♥♥ Full Member   Gender: Tomboy Orientation: Questioning...still... Out Status: 2 great guys who are helping me through everything Location: Southern California Age: 20 Posts: 1,038 Join Date: Apr 2008 | Re: Something I wrote... Nice. Very...thoughtful. I never really thought of it that way. I like it.
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30th Jun 2008, 09:06 PM
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| hugeee. Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: A few people Location: Illinois Posts: 550 Join Date: May 2008 | Re: Something I wrote... Love it (: Thats is pretty creative! |
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30th Jun 2008, 10:30 PM
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| Guest Posts: n/a | Re: Something I wrote... That's so sad. Trying to achieve perfection sucks. Imperfection is much better  |
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1st Jul 2008, 12:12 AM
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| Official #1 fan of Celine Dion Full Member   Gender: Female Orientation: Pansexual/Homoromantic bisexual Out Status: Generally whoever asks Location: I travel a lot Age: 20 Posts: 5,703 Join Date: Jan 2008 | Re: Something I wrote... That was sad. And also a very interesting perception. I liked it.
__________________  Don't drink and drive. You might hit a bump and spill your drink.  Co-founder of the 'Sailor Moon Made Me Gay' club...and the lesbians. |
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1st Jul 2008, 12:27 AM
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| Well Known Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Straight Out Status: trying to make friends Location: Petersburg, Illinois Age: 16 Posts: 211 Join Date: May 2008 | Re: Something I wrote... It had good points!!! Kinda sad though...i guess that gave it fffllavvaa!!!! IT WAS EXCELLENT!!! Keep writing!!!
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