so i wrote this poem and want peoples take on it Have you noticed the signs? How I having been pushing away Will this be unexpected? Or are you already suspecting I hope you don’t get upset But this is not something I can hide I hope you accept Give me a hug and I say I still love you But please don’t be scared I still love and care Know that I proud And this is not a phase When I tell you I hope you won’t freak out Give me a hug and tell me it’s ok Please don’t scream in disapprove And not treat me like I’m a fool For this is my secret And it’s been the hardest to keep But it’s not because of you You are wonderful and true I hope you don’t think it’s a choice Or will you hear my heart signing grace Will you be proud and say I’m brave And realise this is me and I can’t change Now that I’ve told you Will you still love me? Or will your love change And travel into space any advice on it would be much appreciated
I'm not competent enough in English since it's not my native language, so I feel i can't give you any advice, but I can tell you that your poem is beautiful and it makes me feel very deeply the emotions you're trying to express through it.
I hear every pain caused by ignorant straight parents going ballistic when their child comes out. :'(
