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Still Waiting

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Isaac, Aug 25, 2008.

  1. Isaac

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    If I could write what I could feel, then endless the pages would be, if I could see what I feel, I could stare through the world and into the next, if I could hear what I have feel then burning with the echoes from space I could hear, if I could taste what I feel then numb thy tongue would go, if I could smell what I feel no scent again would fill thy soul and if I could touch what I feel then forever would it be in my heart. Sadly I don’t know what it is I feel or that whish I have felt, but I know it is not love, as I am still waiting for that.


    (thought I would post this, if you like it there are more in my blog, I add to it all the time. Thanks for the comments, and opinions, the more the better :slight_smile: )
     
  2. Jim1454

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    Deep. I liked it! Thx.
     
  3. Fiorino

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    I like it!! Keep up the good work!
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  4. Mind Freak

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    That's pretty nifty!
    I like that word... nifty. Lol.

    I'm not very good a poetry, I've always admired people who were though. : )