I know I already did this, but that was almost a week ago, plus my story has changed majorly since then. Anyway, the name is Liberation and it takes place in 2090. Plot: In the future, an evil dictator has taken over America. An orphaned teenage girl named Bea and her sister Olivia run away to the woods to live away from the dictator and his drones, but they soon find out that they aren't the only ones living in the woods. They meet a guy named Mason who takes them to an underground shelter that's home to the people in the rebellion. Realizing that they would have a better chance of survival there, Bea and Olivia join the rebellion. In the rebellion, everyone has a job. There's hunters, gatherers, cooks, and watchers. Bea becomes a watcher, and Olivia becomes a gatherer. Before Bea can become a watcher, she must be trained; so Mason becomes her trainer, and they slowly form a romance. What do you think?
Sounds pretty solid. Have you thought about chucking a twist in it like one of them is actually a member of the dictators party or something similar?
Sounds really good! You should make sure to add a real heartbreaking and tear-jerking twist somewhere into it. Can i read it when its done? :3
