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Let Me Just Be

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Hendrix, Nov 21, 2008.

  1. Hendrix

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    Let me forget words
    How to name in my head
    Actions
    Objects
    Places
    People
    Let them have no name

    Let me forget thoughts
    How to form in my head
    Formulas
    Processes
    Structures
    Relationships
    Let them have no form

    Let me forget feeling
    How to experience in my head
    Sadness
    Anger
    Anxiety
    Pleasure
    Let me have no emotion

    Let me forget myself
    How to justify in my head
    Selfishness
    Pride
    Envy
    Isolation
    Let me leave myself behind

    Let me be without all this
    How to become
    Space
    Stillness
    Calm
    Peace
    Let me just be
     
  2. Hendrix

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    I'm trying to post a few things online to see what people think and how they interpret it, just to see if its any good
     
  3. Larry Myster

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    This is some good poetry.
     
  4. Daniel

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    Wow...I can feel the emotion behind this piece. Very powerful.
     
  5. Beth

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    poetry isnt really my thing but mate thats good :thumbsup:
    good concept.it's deep :slight_smile: