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Need help with lyrics Pt.2

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Simple Thoughts, Jul 4, 2015.

  1. Simple Thoughts

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    Okay so I'm gonna write out the rough draft for the third song in my album and hopefully I'll be able to get some feedback :slight_smile:

    This song will introduce the love interest/secondary main character to the story. So let's do that now xD

    Note: This is the literal first draft. I want to see what people think and where to begin editing it up ^-^

    The Wolf

    ( Verse )
    You've been living on the wild side
    Bare your fangs to those ya scorn
    How does the beat hold back its pride?
    Can your soul even be reborn?

    With a flash of those white fangs
    the predator draws in the prey
    Such a pretty little bang,
    but you'd never bother to stay

    (Bridge)
    You've been living by your own rules
    this world is your domain
    Drawing in all of the fools
    for a reason you can't explain

    (Chorus)

    Drink! Drink! Drink!
    Drown your troubles in a glass
    and get your paws on his ass
    This world is yours to command
    It's all just the way you planned

    So howl (background: Arooooo! ) up at the moon
    It's never too soon
    for you to find a new plaything
    cross your fingers and promise the ring
    That seems to work
    oh yeah
    it works
    for you

    (Verse 2 )

    You're camped inside another bar
    Those cold eyes always narrowed
    Do you remember who you are?
    Will your soul continue to erode?

    Once again you've found your mark
    Such a pretty little thing
    Just fake the hint of a spark
    and get yourself a new fling

    ( bridge )

    You've been living by your own rules
    this world is your domain
    Drawing in all of the fools
    for a reason you can't explain

    (Chorus )

    Drink! Drink! Drink!
    Drown your troubles in a glass
    and get your paws on his ass
    This world is yours to command
    It's all just the way you planned

    So howl (background: Arooooo! ) up at the moon
    It's never too soon
    for you to find a new plaything
    cross your fingers and promise the ring
    That seems to work
    oh yeah
    it works
    for you

    (Breakdown )

    Where does the lone wolf turn,
    when his vision begins to blur?

    Where does the lone wolf turn,
    when his emotions begin to stir?

    You've burned all of your bridges
    Burned them to the ground
    and there is no one left
    no one left around

    so...

    (Chorus )


    Drink! Drink! Drink!
    Drown your troubles in a glass
    and get your paw back on his ass
    This world is yours to command
    It's all just the way you planned

    So howl (background: Arooooo! ) up at the moon
    It's never too soon
    for you to find a new plaything
    cross your fingers and promise the ring
    That seems to work
    oh yeah
    it works
    for you

    Howl up at the moon
    it's never too soon
    For you

    No it's never too soon
    for you

    ( As the music starts to fade off )

    You are the wolf
    who drowns
    in sheep's clothing.