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Just told him

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Derek the Wolf, Dec 29, 2008.

  1. Derek the Wolf

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    So I just told my crush that I like him, with a poem. I think he's bi but I can't be sure. We're both furries (wolves), so I think it's appropriately written. Let me know if ya like it.

    In a world full of pain and death,
    Two souls can take a single breath,
    And in that bond is total bliss,
    Even if it lasts one terse kiss.

    One wolf trapped in a human form,
    To standards of love he won't conform,
    Sees another wolf, all he's not,
    All conventions of love forgot.

    What holds back his strong affection,
    Except fear, losing connection,
    For this fine wolf the only one,
    Which he felt a true companion.

    Yearning to pounce with his request,
    He became ever more depressed,
    Hoping for his hot pink-haired mate,
    And hope to god he is not straight.

    Friend or partner will make him whole,
    For he feels deeply in his soul,
    Either embrace or turn your back,
    Feel always welcome in my pack.


    After the poem I wrote this message.

    So yeah, I have kindof a crush on you.
    I thought this would be a good way to tell ya.
    I value you a lot as a friend, so if you're not interested just let me know. I'll drop it and move on.
    *glomps*
     
  2. summersforecast

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    Nice poem I think its sweet. Hope he reacts well good luck!
     
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    I know I'm technically repeating myself, but I think it needs saying again. A charming poem, well thought out and written. Bonne chance.
     
  4. Urman

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    aww thats a cute poem
     
  5. RaRa

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    I think it's cute. I congratulate you for having the courage to make such a bold move.

    Good luck. :slight_smile:
     
  6. TheRoof

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    poems are so romantic!!
    anyway hope everything goes well!!
     
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    turn that in for English class
     
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    I like your poem. :slight_smile:

    Did you get an answer yet?
     
  9. Derek the Wolf

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    Still waiting. :dry:
     
  10. Brandford

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    Awwww that was so romantic, jesus i wish something like that would happen to me and i wish i had the courage to do something like that
     
  11. Derek the Wolf

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    Mkay, he wrote a comment under my poem:

    Hehe, I love the poem and I for once I dunno quite what quite to say x3. Ill have to talk to ya later on kay? Just remember that I will always be there for ya when you need someone to turn to, no matter how dumb you get! X3

    So I'll talk to him as soon as we get a chance. I'm interested what he's going to say, cause I'm really not sure. Until then.... :thumbsup:
     
  12. musicgirl112233

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    Aww! That was a nice poem. Good luck!!
     
  13. Greggers

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    Sounds positive eh? Good job!