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Derek the Wolf · 29th Dec 2008, 12:15 PM

So I just told my crush that I like him, with a poem. I think he's bi but I can't be sure. We're both furries (wolves), so I think it's appropriately written. Let me know if ya like it.

In a world full of pain and death,
Two souls can take a single breath,
And in that bond is total bliss,
Even if it lasts one terse kiss.

One wolf trapped in a human form,
To standards of love he won't conform,
Sees another wolf, all he's not,
All conventions of love forgot.

What holds back his strong affection,
Except fear, losing connection,
For this fine wolf the only one,
Which he felt a true companion.

Yearning to pounce with his request,
He became ever more depressed,
Hoping for his hot pink-haired mate,
And hope to god he is not straight.

Friend or partner will make him whole,
For he feels deeply in his soul,
Either embrace or turn your back,
Feel always welcome in my pack.

After the poem I wrote this message.

So yeah, I have kindof a crush on you.
I thought this would be a good way to tell ya.
I value you a lot as a friend, so if you're not interested just let me know. I'll drop it and move on.
*glomps*

summersforecast · 29th Dec 2008, 12:19 PM

Nice poem I think its sweet. Hope he reacts well good luck!

Bookmarked · 29th Dec 2008, 01:19 PM

I know I'm technically repeating myself, but I think it needs saying again. A charming poem, well thought out and written. Bonne chance.

29th Dec 2008, 01:24 PM

aww thats a cute poem

RaRa · 29th Dec 2008, 01:26 PM

I think it's cute. I congratulate you for having the courage to make such a bold move.

Good luck.

TheRoof · 29th Dec 2008, 01:28 PM

poems are so romantic!!
anyway hope everything goes well!!

Nixon · 29th Dec 2008, 10:04 PM

turn that in for English class

biisme · 29th Dec 2008, 10:07 PM

I like your poem.

Did you get an answer yet?

Derek the Wolf · 29th Dec 2008, 10:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by biisme

I like your poem.

Did you get an answer yet?

Still waiting.

Brandford · 29th Dec 2008, 11:55 PM

Awwww that was so romantic, jesus i wish something like that would happen to me and i wish i had the courage to do something like that

Derek the Wolf · 30th Dec 2008, 08:27 AM

Mkay, he wrote a comment under my poem:

Hehe, I love the poem and I for once I dunno quite what quite to say x3. Ill have to talk to ya later on kay? Just remember that I will always be there for ya when you need someone to turn to, no matter how dumb you get! X3

So I'll talk to him as soon as we get a chance. I'm interested what he's going to say, cause I'm really not sure. Until then....

musicgirl112233 · 30th Dec 2008, 03:40 PM

Aww! That was a nice poem. Good luck!!

Greggers · 30th Dec 2008, 04:43 PM

Quote:

Hehe, I love the poem and I for once I dunno quite what quite to say x3. Ill have to talk to ya later on kay? Just remember that I will always be there for ya when you need someone to turn to, no matter how dumb you get! X3

Sounds positive eh? Good job!

29th Dec 2008, 12:15 PM	#1
Derek the Wolf Furry Overlord Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Pansexual Out Status: Majority Location: Illinois Age: 20 Posts: 1,325 Join Date: Jul 2008	Just told him So I just told my crush that I like him, with a poem. I think he's bi but I can't be sure. We're both furries (wolves), so I think it's appropriately written. Let me know if ya like it. In a world full of pain and death, Two souls can take a single breath, And in that bond is total bliss, Even if it lasts one terse kiss. One wolf trapped in a human form, To standards of love he won't conform, Sees another wolf, all he's not, All conventions of love forgot. What holds back his strong affection, Except fear, losing connection, For this fine wolf the only one, Which he felt a true companion. Yearning to pounce with his request, He became ever more depressed, Hoping for his hot pink-haired mate, And hope to god he is not straight. Friend or partner will make him whole, For he feels deeply in his soul, Either embrace or turn your back, Feel always welcome in my pack. After the poem I wrote this message. So yeah, I have kindof a crush on you. I thought this would be a good way to tell ya. I value you a lot as a friend, so if you're not interested just let me know. I'll drop it and move on. glomps __________________

29th Dec 2008, 12:19 PM	#2
summersforecast EC Addict Full Member Gender: Carl Orientation: I like dudes and crazy chicks(mostly dudes) Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Johnson City Age: 18 Posts: 777 Join Date: Dec 2008	Re: Just told him Nice poem I think its sweet. Hope he reacts well good luck! __________________ meh..

29th Dec 2008, 01:19 PM	#3
Bookmarked Well Known Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: A gentleman's gentleman. Out Status: O-U-T out. Uh-huh Location: Derby, UK. Age: 21 Posts: 168 Join Date: Jul 2008	Re: Just told him I know I'm technically repeating myself, but I think it needs saying again. A charming poem, well thought out and written. Bonne chance. __________________ People on the internet are silly. Why? Click here

29th Dec 2008, 01:24 PM	#4
Urman Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Just told him aww thats a cute poem

29th Dec 2008, 01:26 PM	#5
RaRa We we we so excited Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: A few people Location: Los Angeles, CA Age: 21 Posts: 7,439 Join Date: Nov 2008	Re: Just told him I think it's cute. I congratulate you for having the courage to make such a bold move. Good luck. __________________ Do you think about me now and then? Do you think about me now and then? Oh now I'm comin' home again Maybe we can start again

29th Dec 2008, 01:28 PM	#6
TheRoof True Blue Full Member Gender: genderqueer Orientation: I like who I like. Location: NY Age: 20 Posts: 1,452 Join Date: Nov 2008	Re: Just told him poems are so romantic!! anyway hope everything goes well!! __________________ Most people go through life dreading they'll have a traumatic experience. Freaks were born with their trauma. They've already passed their test in life. They're aristocrats. -Diane Arbus-

29th Dec 2008, 10:04 PM	#7
Nixon EC Addict Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Go to Catholic School So, NO Location: Dundee, Nebraska (It's in Omaha) Age: 19 Posts: 575 Join Date: Sep 2008	Re: Just told him turn that in for English class __________________ "I drink to stay warm, then kill selected memories"- Conor Oberst' "Some people don't know me neither do I"

29th Dec 2008, 10:07 PM	#8
biisme Call me Katie Full Member Gender: Female Orientation: Bisexual Out Status: Ask me and I'll tell you. Location: Lincoln, Rhode Island Age: 20 Posts: 8,119 Join Date: Oct 2007	Re: Just told him I like your poem. Did you get an answer yet? __________________ From BIG problems to little problems, from broken hearts to broken shoelaces, I really do care. Feel free to PM me anytime about anything. I want to know.

29th Dec 2008, 11:55 PM	#10
Brandford Friendly Misanthrope Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: everyone that asks,my mom (i think) and my sister Location: Woodbridge, VA Age: 19 Posts: 6,656 Join Date: Apr 2008	Re: Just told him Awwww that was so romantic, jesus i wish something like that would happen to me and i wish i had the courage to do something like that __________________ "I find nothing more depressing than optimism." --Paul Fussell

30th Dec 2008, 08:27 AM	#11
Derek the Wolf Furry Overlord Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Pansexual Out Status: Majority Location: Illinois Age: 20 Posts: 1,325 Join Date: Jul 2008	Re: Just told him Mkay, he wrote a comment under my poem: Hehe, I love the poem and I for once I dunno quite what quite to say x3. Ill have to talk to ya later on kay? Just remember that I will always be there for ya when you need someone to turn to, no matter how dumb you get! X3 So I'll talk to him as soon as we get a chance. I'm interested what he's going to say, cause I'm really not sure. Until then.... __________________

30th Dec 2008, 03:40 PM	#12
musicgirl112233 Soy Un Perdedor Full Member Gender: Female Orientation: Lesbian Out Status: Some people Location: South Carolina Age: 17 Posts: 939 Join Date: Apr 2008	Re: Just told him Aww! That was a nice poem. Good luck!! __________________ " Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind, and therefore is winged Cupid painted blind." -A Midsummer Night's Dream Our differences provide opportunties for greater understanding.

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