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How's my story so far?

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Swamp56, Jan 10, 2009.

  1. Swamp56

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    I've been working on a creative writing story for no particular reason (writing relieves stress for me).

    I've done a chapter so far, and I didn't know how the story was so far...I need some constructive criticism to help me fix up the chapter :slight_smile: . Btw, I think of the plot as I write lol...this isn't planned out at all.

    What you have to notice is that I purposely don't describe characters in great detail so that you, the readers, can imagine them for yourself.
     

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  2. crystaltriforce

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    :icon_bigg this is great i would like to read more when you finish writing more of it.
     
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    same here- but I would be careful because that thing shows your full name
     
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    I have removed the link. One of the staff was able to find you very quickly on Facebook from your name in there. Please post the text here or link to a version that does not contain your name.
     
  5. Swamp56

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    I updated the file

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  6. Samus610

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    This is really good.