I've been working on a creative writing story for no particular reason (writing relieves stress for me). I've done a chapter so far, and I didn't know how the story was so far...I need some constructive criticism to help me fix up the chapter . Btw, I think of the plot as I write lol...this isn't planned out at all. What you have to notice is that I purposely don't describe characters in great detail so that you, the readers, can imagine them for yourself.
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