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10th Jan 2009, 07:39 PM
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| EC Addict Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Boston, MA Age: 21 Posts: 2,166 Join Date: Aug 2008 |  How's my story so far? I've been working on a creative writing story for no particular reason (writing relieves stress for me). I've done a chapter so far, and I didn't know how the story was so far...I need some constructive criticism to help me fix up the chapter  . Btw, I think of the plot as I write lol...this isn't planned out at all.What you have to notice is that I purposely don't describe characters in great detail so that you, the readers, can imagine them for yourself.
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10th Jan 2009, 07:46 PM
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| raised by nintendo and sega Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: all but extended family Location: outside of Philadelphia Age: 21 Posts: 1,825 Join Date: Dec 2008 | Re: How's my story so far?  this is great i would like to read more when you finish writing more of it.
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10th Jan 2009, 08:45 PM
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| EC Addict Full Member  Gender: ♂ Orientation: ♂+♂=♥♥♥ Out Status: Most people, but I still activly hide it from some Location: Tennessee Age: 19 Posts: 659 Join Date: Nov 2007 | Re: How's my story so far? same here- but I would be careful because that thing shows your full name
__________________ "C'mon, Cody. You're acting like an angry evil mutated chipmunk that just had it's sword stolen." "If a fudpucker could puck fud, how much fud could a fudpucker puck if a fudpucker could puck fud." |
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11th Jan 2009, 01:05 AM
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| Former Empty Closets Admin Full Member   Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Bournemouth, UK Age: 47 Posts: 13,155 Join Date: Nov 2004 | Re: How's my story so far? Quote:
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11th Jan 2009, 08:33 AM
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| Super Spaz Full Member   Gender: Female Orientation: Bisexual Out Status: Out to anyone who asks. Location: Massachusetts Age: 20 Posts: 497 Join Date: Jul 2007 | Re: How's my story so far? This is really good.
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