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Swearing in a text to correct it. [opinions needed]

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Secrets5, Dec 16, 2015.

  1. Secrets5

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    Hello,

    This is based on Doctor Who [P. Newman and V. Lambert et al] / Sarah Jane Adventures [R. T. Davis].

    So I'm writing a script for R.T.'s unallowed idea of Luke and Sanjay 'getting together'? Anyway, so there's a part where Luke doesn't know Sanjay is going to kiss him, and he pulls away. So Sanjay makes an offensive swearing in regards to Luke being straight? I've gone on to correct that swearing with The Doctor [It would have been Sarah-Jane but she's impossible to cast] saying it's not nice to make fun of *any* sexuality [which is my justification for wanting to put it in].

    Bare in mind the age rating for people watching this will be as young as 5 and no upper age range.

    So would it be okay? Need opinions before I write anything [even if it's probably never going to get sent in].
     
    #1 Secrets5, Dec 16, 2015
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