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poems watchu think?

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Sarah, Mar 4, 2009.

  1. Sarah

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    Location:
    the place around where i am
    Walking, in the distance
    I see a clear light just ahead
    What can it possibly be?
    As i move closer it goes farther away
    Why won't it stay with me?

    Time passes. People leave
    Friends grow, loved ones die
    Yet I remain. Alone afraid
    I am me and i am here

    I have nothing to say
    yet i keep talking
    my mouth is full of words
    yet they're empty of meaning
    i keep on talking
    when i have nothing to say
    but my questions is
    do you hear wat it said
    but unsaid?
    do you hear what i dont have to say?
    my words mean nothing
    my thoughts mean everything
    everything said is unsaid
    and everything unsaid is said​

    cn u c wat im sayn? do u undrstnd wat dis sayz? u do r u dnt

    cheerful giggles of children, rain pitter pattering on the roof "rain rain go away come again another day" they sing together. but why go away? rain cleans the earth of the filth we cause everyday, i welcome rain, i welcome rain

    im always with you. yet you're never here. i see your eyes i feel your gaze. your='re here. you're gone. you're far. you're near. stay with me. don't ever leave. you make me laugh you make me cry. you make me feel, so alive, dont walk away. all i ask is for you to stay.

    hide my heart, burry my soul, i cannot love i dont know how, how can i love in the deepest depths of darkness? shield my heart guard my soul, i dont need more pain. i cannont fall in love. but here i am, fallen. i feel its pain.

    cold silver, warm red. high up, way down. spinning room, still statue. red river, silver stream.dont move me, dont leave me. let me be but please just stay, look into my eyes, listen to my cries. full of a silver stream caused by a red river, dont go away, please please just stay

    all of the above are by me. the next on is by me and jsandoval1192(did i get right?)

    All these voices I start to hear
    they sound so far yet seem so near
    my mind is so far away
    how will i know what goes on today?
    it looks as if my will to survive is slowly fadind
    yet inreality I'm simply waiting
    Will it ever come to be?
    will anyone ever turely see
    that all I ever want to do
    is to just be with you
    i see you all the time, day to day
    see you laugh hear you say
    how much you need to love and be loved in return
    but I'm afraid to say how much i want you, but i never learn
    it feels so real but cant possibly be true
    this love that i feel, that i feel for you
    i want to be noticed
    but it feels like im stuck in a never ending mist
    and here you are this shining light
    guiding me though this misty night
    showing me the way to eternal happieness
    while you're still shroude in the mystery of darkness
     
  2. riddlerno1

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    i think your poem is amazing!

    very deep and quite sad too!
     
  3. punkrocker99

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    I liked them all and i think the first one ,maybe more of them too, could be really good song lyrics too. :slight_smile: