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Swamp56 · 31st Mar 2009, 11:29 PM

Yay!

5.5 Pages long, and it's finally done ^.^ .

I applied for a $5,000 scholarship for people who have overcome either physical or mental boundaries in theirs lives.

And of course, me being practically a walking mental disorder, decided I'd give a whack at this and see how well I could write

.

Anyway, instead of posting the actual essay here, I recorded it in audio

. This seems to be an easier thing to do than read, since many people find more relaxing to listen and absorb things than straining the eyes.

Anyway, tell me how mine is

[linky]

It's WMA format; if anyone needs a different format, I will gladly upload it. Also please note that I meant "windy" as in when something winds, not "windy as in when there is much wind in the air

at the last few seconds of the passage.

Lychee · 31st Mar 2009, 11:38 PM

Omg, you sound so American!!

And I really really like the essay. I'm impressed

Bryan44 · 31st Mar 2009, 11:41 PM

Very well written and read.
Thanks for sharing that, it was very inspirational.

Swamp56 · 1st Apr 2009, 01:06 PM

Thanks

. I still think that this paper is a bit bland, but I worked hard on it ^.^

1st Apr 2009, 01:08 PM

You should copy/paste it on here. You'd probably get more readers that way.

Z3ni · 1st Apr 2009, 01:09 PM

'walking mental disorder' lol

Swamp56 · 1st Apr 2009, 01:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Enigma

You should copy/paste it on here. You'd probably get more readers that way.

As Ben was telling me, some of these places scan the internet to see if they can find copies of the paper and I don't want them to get confused and think I ripped this thing off ^.^ .

31st Mar 2009, 11:29 PM	#1
Swamp56 EC Addict Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Boston, MA Age: 21 Posts: 2,166 Join Date: Aug 2008	My Scholarship Paper! Yay! 5.5 Pages long, and it's finally done ^.^ . I applied for a $5,000 scholarship for people who have overcome either physical or mental boundaries in theirs lives. And of course, me being practically a walking mental disorder, decided I'd give a whack at this and see how well I could write . Anyway, instead of posting the actual essay here, I recorded it in audio . This seems to be an easier thing to do than read, since many people find more relaxing to listen and absorb things than straining the eyes. Anyway, tell me how mine is [linky] It's WMA format; if anyone needs a different format, I will gladly upload it. Also please note that I meant "windy" as in when something winds, not "windy as in when there is much wind in the air at the last few seconds of the passage. __________________ Last edited by Swamp56; 31st Mar 2009 at 11:32 PM..

31st Mar 2009, 11:38 PM	#2
Lychee EC Addict Full Member Gender: Spazmatazz Orientation: Friendspage Location: Contrabassoon Posts: 1,739 Join Date: Aug 2008	Re: My Scholarship Paper! Omg, you sound so American!! And I really really like the essay. I'm impressed __________________ We we we so excited.

31st Mar 2009, 11:41 PM	#3
Bryan44 Dork Full Member Gender: Male Location: Georgia (the state) Posts: 2,065 Join Date: Feb 2009	Re: My Scholarship Paper! Very well written and read. Thanks for sharing that, it was very inspirational.

1st Apr 2009, 01:06 PM	#4
Swamp56 EC Addict Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Boston, MA Age: 21 Posts: 2,166 Join Date: Aug 2008	Re: My Scholarship Paper! Thanks . I still think that this paper is a bit bland, but I worked hard on it ^.^ __________________

1st Apr 2009, 01:08 PM	#5
The Enigma Guest Posts: n/a	Re: My Scholarship Paper! You should copy/paste it on here. You'd probably get more readers that way.

1st Apr 2009, 01:09 PM	#6
Z3ni Ec's ADD Full Member Gender: Male Orientation: Gayish Out Status: My Twin Location: England, Manchester Posts: 3,080 Join Date: Oct 2008	Re: My Scholarship Paper! 'walking mental disorder' lol __________________ Through pain, lies success.

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