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IMPORTANT:Always remember the things that make life worth living

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by paco, May 8, 2010.

  1. paco

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    A little ode

    A mellow green husk
    Hides a passionate pink heart
    That holds a crisp flavor
    That is sweet, but delights to be savored.
    Your humble origins crawling in dirt
    Betray your wonders and hidden worth.
    From a little black seed
    Into a twisting vine
    You sprang forth for harvest
    And now the pleasure is mine.
    In the cold you wait
    So patient and benign
    But I will not be fooled,
    For when it is time
    I’ll be there to release you.
    And I will not forget
    The joy that you bring.
    And when that hour comes,
    We two will join
    My heart will be filled
    (Almost as much as my stomach)
    And Watermelon; we will never be parted
    It is the end of spring,
    And your season has officially started.
     
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  2. D_Alejandro

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    Re: IMPORTANT:Always remember the things that make live worth living

    That was very nice! Thank you for sharing! :slight_smile: :grin:
     
  3. Chip

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    What a cute, sweet poem! :slight_smile:

    Typo fixed for u :slight_smile:
     
  4. paco

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    thank you :slight_smile:

    oh how i love watermelon season.
     
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    Good one... The irony here is that I was eating watermelon while reading this!
     
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    i was all like "oh its so deep and seems like such a sweet love.... wait wtf watermelon xD"
     
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    someone should make this into a song with sick guitar solos and pyro-technics
     
  8. paco

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    that's not irony. that's fate.
     
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