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My poem: Heart of Hearts

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Hidden Angel, Nov 16, 2007.

  1. Hidden Angel

    Hidden Angel Guest

    Hey I wrote this poem a while ago but just decided to put it on now. Tell me what you think.:stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:ride:

    Heart of Hearts
    It is not what you have been taught,
    but how the desire in your heart burns.
    it is the way you truly feel inside,
    no mater what it is that you learn.

    It is not something anyone can teach you,
    but only what your heart can see,
    if it makes you different from others,
    then that is the way it must be.

    It is simply just the way you were born,
    and not a choice in which others can have a say,
    because in you heart of hearts you know,
    whether you are straight or gay.
     
  2. biisme

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    i lik it. b/c it's very true.
     
  3. You're quite a talented writer for producing such a nice poem.

    In particular, I liked the second stanza. :slight_smile: