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is it any good

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by Monique_Massacre, Nov 29, 2007.

  1. hush don't speak a word about the dreams that i live for
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down
    dont speak again, i'm still waiting for my turn
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down

    my dreams are growing into
    frustrations when i hear your voice
    (feeding me til i'm choking)
    my ears are ringing louder
    repeating words that bring me down
    (ringing, my ears are bleeding)

    (so hold your breath and spare me)
    *the pointless conversation, im running out of patience*
    (don't blame me for trying to reach)

    hush don't speak a word about the dreams that i live for
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down
    dont speak again, i'm still waiting for my turn
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down

    as you are moving forward
    i feel as if i can't catch up
    (trying so hard to reach you)
    i'm stuck here at the bottom
    you're too high up to come back down
    (trying so hard to reach you)

    (so hold your breath and spare me)
    *the pointless conversation, im running out of patience*
    (don't blame me for trying to reach)

    don't speak a word about the dreams that i live for
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down
    dont speak again, i'm still waiting for my turn
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down

    -silence your harsh words my dear
    my ears are ringing of this
    i can't stop thinking of it-
    ~i try to reach you but i fall~

    hush don't speak a word *about the dreams that i live for*
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down
    dont speak again, *i'm still waiting for my turn*
    it hurts to reach you when i'm down


    () screamed and sang at the same time repeat once before next line

    no () just sang

    * just screamed

    - repeated three times

    ~ repeated as sings verse three times repeated threw out

    only works with a female and male voices (male screams) (female just sings)
     
    #1 Monique_Massacre, Nov 29, 2007
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  2. Kibuki kid

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    Its always harder to imagine without music but i think the lyrics good, they flow in an interesting way.
     
  3. Leon481

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    Looks good.