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Poetry Corner

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by xxAngelOnFirexx, Jan 7, 2008.

  1. xxAngelOnFirexx

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    All poets and amature poetry writers post your poems here! EC has a lot of talent and we need a thread for it at least. We can make a short story thread too if you like. This one will be fore poems though because the other writing thread was a mess. Also this thread will be talk and comments on the poems too. and mods if i didn't put this in the right section you can move it as none of them really specify.

    I'll start i just wrote this poem the other day and i'm pretty proud of it.

    The ABC’s Of Misery

    Tears that I haven't cried,
    Days that I haven’t died,
    God I’m so torn inside
    Why do I have to abide?
    Worlds so crazy when?
    Can’t even think of then.
    Hiding out inside the den,
    Writing miseries with a pen.
    Worry, terror, pain, and pride,
    These are feelings I must hide.
    Life is tough, you’re in for a ride
    Going quicker than the tide.
    Evils brewing like a witch.
    Life sucks. It’s such a bitch.
    Can never reach evil’s itch,
    Listening to preachers’ pitch.
    Blackened rainbows rise up here,
    Children crying, deep in fear,
    Crying out every single tear,
    No love here to find my dear.
    Looking for me, everywhere.
    Taking bets and making a dare.
    No ones looking, but please don't stare,
    Naked feelings, naked-bare.
    I really wish people could see,
    Tied down angels can't be free.
    Sheltering under the tallest tree,
    No home for people, they decree.
    Demon dogs with a vicious bite,
    Crazy people filled with spite.
    Bills stack up and money tight,
    Sleep all day and up all night.
    Dictators rising under power,
    Loosing hope just by the hour,
    Crushing beauty, every flower,
    Building death just like a tower.
    Life on earth is just so frightening.
    Bad storms are filled with lightning.
    Sun is up but not as brightening.
    Talk is nice, but not enlightening.
    No voices that are able to sing,
    Bells are broken and never ring.
    No one has much of anything,
    So nothing they’re to truly bring.
    We’ll use the future to truly find,
    That work’s too tough in the daily grind,
    School is too much for the mind.
    Now, please, let us put this entire behind.


    and i'm like to mention why in the title i call it "abc's" its because the ryhme scheme is aaaabbbbcccc instead of a normal ababcdcd or aabbccdd. but yeah :icon_mrgr :sunglasses:
     
  2. Latinokid

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    Ook i wrote this on 9/13/07 the time i was coming out to most of my friends.
    Outcast
    Eyes on me
    I'm the tease
    As i go past i hear snickering
    Giggles and chatters
    You'd think I'm as hot as Ms.Britney

    I wear a cross to protect me
    Seems the weight is more than i can take
    But i have some people on my side
    I'm not a sinner, this wasn't my choice

    I was born like this
    All you see is me
    I'm proud of what I are
    Rainbow colors? Yep that's me

    I don't know why
    But you keep staring at me
    Is there something you'd like to see?
    Your cold looks melt once they reach me
    Why do you do this if it doesn't affect you?

    I like guys and that's me
    But why must I be the outcast?
    A serial killer has a warmer welcome than me

    If you don't like it, don't look
    What doesn't intrest you, shouldn't bother you
    So in my eyes your the outcast
    Not me
     
  3. I carry you from the floor,
    Hair draped across the coffin door,
    I can feel your one last breath
    Like a fire burning, it never left

    On my bloody fingertips,
    Remains the vemon on your lips
    Bittersweet poison in my veins
    A soul so clean, but now with taint

    If immortality meant enternity
    I wouldn't have this death inside me
    If it really meant living forever,
    Then what life do I have left to sever?

    Blue eyes closed, just another regret
    Another soul lost, so easy to forget
    I sink my teeth into my flesh-desire
    Your lesson well-learned: never kiss a vampire
     
  4. Latinokid

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    your guys poems are amazing...keep writing. =]
     
  5. Bleed me baby,
    drink me dry.
    I promise you
    I won’t cry.
    Scar my flesh
    and mark me yours.
    i want your midnight haze
    I want the dark
    I need its rays.

    The sunlight’s sharp,
    The moonlight soft
    I hear your call,
    I follow swift.
    You suddenly appear
    and I see you shift.
    Expose my neck,
    My skin it rips.
    Fangs deep within
    But I feel no pain.
    Blood drained from every vein;
    I think you’ve made me go insane.

    One drop from your wrist
    And my color it drifts.
    Paled in the likeness of the full moon,
    My canines sharpen all too soon.
    Licking my lips,
    I open my eyes.
    I kiss your bloodstained lips
    And yet I crave for more
     
  6. lostinthought9

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  7. my poems suck ass dude
     
  8. Ilayis

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    People like me,find no way to be
    Then to feel human,we need answers
    To silent to hear,slowly we carry on
    Breaking again we find no peace
    We stand alone,while they carry on
    Feeling no peace,we itch
    Finding no love,we scratch
    Knowing no friendship,we claw
    No belief
    No care
    No remorse
    No heaven to have,We roam the night
    Humans we find,Prey they are not....to us
    They fade away piece by piece
    They are found,We are found
    Fingers wrap across the bars
    We are now human
     
  9. lostinthought9

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    they dont suck, i think they're cool, i like vampires
     
  10. Blood red lips conceal the fangs,
    for love or lust, the hunger pangs,
    one soft incision, one moment of bliss,
    grow limp to the lure of the vampire kiss

    Stalk the night in search of prey,
    Live in shadow, Sleep by day,
    Clothe the world in drapes of dark,
    Dead lips scream - enduring; hark!

    For love is lost where life is too,
    Together apart, romance askew,
    A cold embrace, a withered heart,
    A resentful love, one cannot impart

    Trapped in a corpse, roaming the Earth,
    Devoid of humanity, Robbed of all mirth,
    To be immortal means to never be free,
    Of the torment of life, never rested will be.