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Black and white [Poem]

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  1. GlindaRose

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    I somehow got inspired in the middle of my English lesson to write a poem about me being gay. It's called 'Black and white', and I'm currently using it to try and come out to another friend of mine. As in, I just sent her an e-mail with it attached..anyway, here's the poem. :slight_smile:

    One day from a dream I did wake,
    And realized the colours were tinted:
    They stood out, more vivid,
    Conspicuous against the black and white background.

    Every soul was the same:
    They blurred a monotone grey,
    Yet here and there were dots of hue,
    And among them was mine.

    Black craved white, and vice versa,
    But I and the minority of colours
    Could not have either.
    They didn’t desire us; only each other,

    Just as we colours desired each other,
    Though we craved the same,
    Not our reciprocal.
    Pink reached out for pink, not blue.
     
  2. JWAD

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    Wow I love that poem, you're really gud
     
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    That was wicked. I can't even say something witty to that!
     
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    Beautiful!! Very thought provoking .:thumbsup:
     
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    Aces, I like it
     
  6. GlindaRose

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    Oh wow it was good? Thanks guys! :grin:
     
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    Right-ho, everyone; here's another one. It's called 'Eve's Lover' and it looks at sexuality from a more religious respective. Here it is:

    It is a sin,
    Or so I am told
    By my parents: devout Christians;
    By the Bible: for Adam desires Eve
    And Eve is a woman.
    Yet I, a woman, desire Eve.

    I can’t help it: it’s how God made me,
    And why would God create a sin?
    They think I’m infected by the Devil;
    That they can exorcise me
    And make me ‘normal’.

    They want to find me an Adam,
    But I don’t want Adam; I crave the other;
    That which is my like pole.
    But just like a magnet,
    Like poles are meant to repel.
    Am I faulty?

    No: I am human,
    Not a piece of metal.
    In my life, like poles attract
    And two Eves are Yin and Yang.
     
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    You are a beautiful writer, I love these poems. You have a very distinctive writing style, and it feels very captivating to read.
     
  9. JWAD

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    You'rereally good at writting.

    Looks like ec may have stumbled upon a young poet.
     
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    That is beautiful! It inspired me to come out to my best friend as bi yesterday. I almost sent her the poem, but it wouldn't have made sense, cuz i'm a guy. Still, quite beautiful!
     
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    I really like both of those, thanks for sharing them
     
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    One word for your poems

    beautiful.:eusa_clap
     
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    :eusa_clap I usually don't like poetry but I loved those. Fantastic.
     
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    Wow this is cool, like, thinking it helped someone come out the closet..thanks everyone! :slight_smile: