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1st Mar 2008, 12:24 PM
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| Guest Posts: n/a |  Quick Poem I just wrote this quikly, it was inspired by heatqueen's 'Black and White' poem and then the one which followed later on that thread. And so God created Adam Adam was alone in Gods garden And so God created Eve Adam craved Eve Eve craved Adam The garden was complete The garden was not complete Adams no longer craved Eves Eves no longer craved Adams Adams craved for another Adam Eves craved for another Eve Adams began kissing Adams Eves began kissing Eves God was disappointed God couldn’t satisfy his creations God disappeared Man began to fight Eve craving Adams hunted Adam craving Adams Adam craving eves hunted Eve craving Eves God watched Man found God God greeted Man God spoke to Man Man listened to God God spoke one message Man heard many Man still hunted Man Man still killed Man Man claimed to know God Man lost God Many Man heard God Few Man listened God praised Peace Man craved War The Adam loving Adam The Eve loving Eve Heard God Listened to God Followed God They craved not War They craved Peace They craved Love Probably a bit soppy or wotever, I only spent about twenty minutes writting it. It's also a bit long normally I'd shorten it and edit it but I cant actually be bothered at home. |
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1st Mar 2008, 02:24 PM
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| Well Known Regular Member  Gender: Male Orientation: Gay Out Status: Out to everyone Location: Minneapolis, MN Age: 22 Posts: 155 Join Date: Jan 2008 | Re: Quick Poem While you won't believe that such a thing is possibly a truth, I am competitively interpret poetry at contests an such. If this were published, I would consider using it with some other poems in competition.
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1st Mar 2008, 02:33 PM
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| Official #1 fan of Celine Dion Full Member   Gender: Female Orientation: Pansexual/Homoromantic bisexual Out Status: Generally whoever asks Location: I travel a lot Age: 20 Posts: 5,706 Join Date: Jan 2008 | Re: Quick Poem Wow that is good!  I'm glad you found my poems inspiring. Nice job!
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1st Mar 2008, 05:21 PM
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| Call me Katie Full Member   Gender: Female Orientation: Bisexual Out Status: Ask me and I'll tell you. Location: Lincoln, Rhode Island Age: 20 Posts: 8,119 Join Date: Oct 2007 | Re: Quick Poem i like it
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2nd Mar 2008, 02:21 PM
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| Guest Posts: n/a | Re: Quick Poem thanx I really did just spend about half an hour on it I'm surprised you all like it. |
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2nd Mar 2008, 02:48 PM
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| Member Regular Member  Gender: Female Orientation: Lesbian Out Status: Out to everyone Location: PA Posts: 24 Join Date: Mar 2008 | Re: Quick Poem good poem |
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