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LGBT Poem

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by FemCasanova, Mar 6, 2013.

  1. FemCasanova

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    I wrote this years ago, and my straight friends didn`t get it. I wonder if people from this side of the fence do, lol. Or if I am just that subtle!


    Summers Love
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    ... ... ...
    The soft summer wind whispered,
    To the lonely fall.
    Hearing nothing but silence,
    Nothing there at all.

    She felt like she had given
    All the breath within
    Still she watched helplessly
    As fall let winter win.

    Although all she ever had to do
    Was to trust the shining sun
    Always hanging warmly around.
    Instead of his winter-gun

    Treacherous the spring came lurkin
    Between the sleeping trees.
    Summer feared, saw and cried,
    when fall confided to the breeze

    “I could give you the heavens.
    Show you all that I have seen.
    Love you more than him or her
    And everything in between.”

    And summer wept a sea of blue
    Feeling rather confused.
    Her love went beyond the rules
    How come she felt so refused?

    The wrong side of the coin
    Dark side of the moon.
    Venus caressing Aphrodite
    On a hammock during June

    This Venus cared not for Aphrodite
    Only Neptun in her mind.
    A man indeed as normal is
    The lover a fall would find.

    Not only could they never love,
    It almost broke her heart.
    Now the simple breeze of spring
    Stole the advisors part.

    “What was wrong with my advice?
    Didn’t you hear the tone?
    Or did you hear and come to learn
    The love behind the stone?
    Did your heart cry out in fear,
    As my shy love was shown?
    Then tell me dove, if that is so
    Should I stay, or should I go?”

    The bitter gust inside her mind
    Feeling second best
    As they spoke, low and dear
    Stabbing summers chest.

    “I was here when you first bled.
    Have been here ever since.
    Always leaving the world behind
    Each child and hanging quince”

    ...
    In the end, summer died,
    And fall stood all alone.
    Seeing spring for what it was,
    A heart meant only for loan.

    When winters cold,
    had killed them all
    he truly wondered so.

    Why had they not
    Just loved and hold
    Instead of letting go?




    :icon_redf

    So, what is it about?

    Lol...
     
  2. Cynder

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    I'm not sure if I got it right, but to me, I feel that it is about one loving truly another, but because of who they were, never even getting a chance or thought, and seeing her love superficialy love someone else.
     
  3. Nice poem. I didn't really see the LGBT part of it, you must just be that subtle.
     
  4. FemCasanova

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    Nice, yeah, that`s pretty spot on. It`s about a friend who I fell in love with, the first serious love that made me realize my sexuality, but who was straight and with an habit of falling for guys who were bad for her.

    (*hug*)
     
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    really nice and beautiful poem,hats off to you
     
  6. FemCasanova

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    Thank you, Cassexy :slight_smile:
    Writing is a great way of working through emotions. I did it a lot when I was younger, sometimes still do.