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[Joining the Fad] Poem [Cause I'm cool]

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by InaRut, Apr 6, 2008.

  1. InaRut

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    Doubts

    So here is a little poem for you lovely and admirable people of EC. The first lyric was my first thought when I woke up this morning...So I kept in my head and went straight for the computer. The rest of the poem seem to flow---till the end. I think I need to work on it still but it'll probobly be more interesting if I post it now when it first appeared in my head.

    I saw you at a booth
    You neck in a noose
    Your hand hugging a beer
    Your face sick and queer

    And I ask you to reach out to me
    My friend -- to be
    I ask what is you’ve done
    To put out the burning sun.

    I saw you in the rain,
    Your heart in pain,
    Your hand hugging a note
    They think, “You won’t.”

    And I ask you to look to me,
    And tell me, how can this be?
    Standing on a bridge looking tall.
    To everyone else, you are so small.

    I saw you at night
    Your face gave me a fright
    Your hands hugging a hat

    Being eaten by a street rat.


    And I ask you to say,
    How did you get to be this way,
    Crack in your pocket
    And x-wife in your locket.

    I saw you in your home,
    Writing this poem
    Your hands hugging a drink
    Your brain, to think.

    And I ask you to today
    Will you escape the fray?
    Doubts and worries pass my mind
    But those are thoughts I can put behind
     
  2. Grof142007

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    Nice I like it