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Poetry <3

Discussion in 'Chit Chat' started by ghost_in_the_sewer, Jun 23, 2013.

  1. ghost_in_the_sewer

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    Come and write your poems or songs in here and see what other people think about it.

    Here's mine:

    This Room

    This room.... keeps me here,
    because the world keeps me in fear,
    This room... makes me feel safe,
    I stay here for many days,

    This room is my life,
    I treat this room like it was my man or wife,
    always there when I'm down,
    This room.... is where i can be found

    No matter how I feel
    This room will be here,
    In this one place
    This room... is my place.
     
  2. MerBear

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    i love it. that is really good :grin:

    sadly, i quit poetry after 4 years of doing it...i was no good but there is one thing ...i can do with poetry. I'm good at analyzing poetry sometimes.

    Keep it up :slight_smile:
     
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    ^ this was my favourite bit. bravo :slight_smile:
     
  4. Candace

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    I liked the simplicity of it! Good job! :slight_smile:
     
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    "Inner Demons"
    There's a war going on inside of me,
    I hope I find it in me to be who I'm destined to be.
    The fires rage on,
    Twenty years burning strong.
    They show no signs of stopping,
    No not at all.
    The demons they sing,
    Their siren wails they sting.
    Oh how I wish they would stop,
    Oh how I wish it would cease.
    There's a war going on inside of me,
    I hope I find the strength to be who I know I'm supposed to be.
     
  6. ghost_in_the_sewer

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    This is just.... Amazing!
     
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    Here's mine from the thread I made for it:

     
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    A clear message and good imagery :thumbsup: great job! :slight_smile: