I saw another thread about somebody that made a poem. So I thought that I could try to write one with something close to my heart: my crush (obviously). Just to let you know, the thread isn't directly aimed at my crush, but obviously the poem itself is. The poem does have a title, which is his name, but I'm not sire I want to share that. Here goes: I like your crisp, brown eyes. They appear to me Crystallized and Transparent. Our eyes meet: They intimidate me, Invite me, Lure me, Suffocate me. I am in your impenetrable possession; Comfort me, Caress me, Manipulate me, Abuse me, to your heart's desire. I like your refined, pulsating lips. As emotionless they appear, I see a structure of solemn Pride, Ambition, Honour, Desire. They throb painfully as you yearn, To appease me with your delight. Go on, do it - Kiss me. I like your pure, angelic face. You reluctantly smile charmfully: Your simplicity, Your sensitivity, Your vulnerability, Your lack of defense: Relaxes me. Your expression: Stimulates me, Excites me, Pleasures me, Sinfully fulfills my climax. Young you may be, You are as old as I am. Young you may be, You are as mature as I am. Young you may be, You are as passionate as I am. I love you - My sweet, My ripe, ...My delicious. ******** Do you like it?
I think it's very nice and is coming deep within straight from the heart. I like poems and I think it's a great way of showing your feelings.
