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My prize winning essay...what do you think

Discussion in 'Coming Out Advice' started by dancingqueen79, May 14, 2008.

  1. dancingqueen79

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    This is an essay I wrote for school, I read it in my English class, then to the whole school, tell me what you think

    Have you ever told a gay joke?

    Made fun of someone?

    Have you ever been made fun of because of your race? gender? personality? or your sexuality?

    On Feburary 15th 2008 at 8:45a.m.

    Gay teen Larry David was shot in the head and killed by another boy whom the day before he asked to be his valentine....you see

    Why is it that

    Guys can say "Gay people are gross"

    Than instantly turn around and watch two girls make out on Youtube.

    That is the hypocrisy of America and its teens.

    People are saying "Gay people are an abomination to the Lord"

    Is that why he created them?

    So next time you make a gay joke, or call someone gay

    First it starts with a punchline

    Then a nudge

    Then a push

    Than a punch

    Then a kick

    Next thing you know you shoot someone in the head thinking "That's okay they were gay, they don't count"

    THEY DO!!!!!

    Early on young boys are taught

    You're a real man if you drink beer, watch action movies, make out with girls, fart, burp, like lesbians, work with tools, play football, play sports.... I HATE IT

    You are a real man if you express yourself and your are proud of who you are and you don't give a crud what anyone else thinks.

    I sing showtunes and bounce around, but you know what? I have friends who don't care how I am because they like me the way I am

    So a message to all of the LGBT people in the world living in fear

    Learn to be who your are, love who you are and DO NOT be afraid to show the world who you are

    If your friends cannot accept you for who you are...they are not your friends

    STAND UP AND TAKE A STAND AGAINST HOMPHOBIA

    FIGHT FOR GAY MARRIAGE
     
  2. hoping

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    wow man i love it. you put my writing to shame. you really have a passion in what your talking about cause its part of who you are. again i love it and keep writing man wow im speechless
     
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    Hi,

    This is a great piece of writing. Your passion and message is clear for all to see. Amazing job! I think it should be a Sticky thread so that it does not get lost. Everyone who visits this site should have a chance to read it.
     
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    very nice
     
  5. I love it! ill remember that for a long time! especially on pride weekend when im in chicago! hoorah for you and your essay!
     
  6. JSG

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    Excellent paper !! Really inspirational and I hope it helps as many LGBT teens as possible.
    I can't not quote this song:
     
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    That is really inspirational! Great essay! (!)
     
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    Wow, I love it! Great work!
     
  9. AlmightyFluffy

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    That is...
    you are..

    i-

    Awesome.
    :3
     
  10. interstella

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    I wish I had the guts to stand up in front of my school and say that. that is an AWESOME essay! :grin:
     
  11. Leigh

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    wow youre so brave.
    that is really fabulous:eusa_clap