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first college essay.

Discussion in 'Coming Out Advice' started by Danny19, Sep 23, 2010.

  1. Danny19

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    well im writing my first college essay. at first i was doing good, but now im on my final draft and i have to write more. But now my mind is blank and im very frustrated. Maybe you guys can help me a little.

    the topic is about prop 8. I had to chose one ad from 10 that the teacher posted. i chose
    this one... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIL7PUl24hE .. so i have to write about it and i have to go into depth and stuff on what is said and done. I wrote all the obvious but i dont know what else. you guys will probably think of stuff i missed. it has to be 3-4 pages long and i have 2 only. i would really appreciate the help.

    thanks in advance
     
  2. HalfInsane

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    Perhaps give a list of what, specifically, you've already covered so everyone can better think of areas you can expand on/add in. Might be helpful. :wink:
     
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    Mention how children are used a lot of the time (give other examples) to coerce a viewer into doing something "for the children".