Okay so I wrote this slam poem and I just wanted advice about it. </3 I honesetly didn't know where to put it so I just picked support and advice. And I don't mean to offend anyone it's just my opinion This world is so depressing addressing it's inhabitants like insects Squish to squash the crunch under the boot crushing you, no divine intervention. What if we were praying to something that doesn't even exists Afraid of the unseen no hell heaven of bliss. Or is it just me; was I denied my right of passage? Because I preached unholy things of love and peace And my daddy died a man not a church going priest Dear lord, if your hearing me now then tell me there wrong ................... Oh yea that's right I forgot you don't answer in fags Unless there standing on your doorstep rotting in bags of emotional corpses And muscle toned soreness of hearts and bloody faces One question, why would he make me different if he was just going to ignore me. See I have enough hate from dilutions of abuse it's almost easy to pretend I'm nor there. Look see, you don't even have to ignore me Im already dead and the abrasion of colors multiply in the dark damp corners in my head I have 20/20 vision of black and gray Injustice and inadequate I sit and I say, "What should I do to make you love me?" ....................... And the ecliptic cycle begins, I ask a question and you ignore me Well screw you! I don't need you! What have you done for me? What have you done for me that I couldn't do myself? Oh lord don't send me to hell; that's bullshit. I'll sell my soul and it would still be my decision I want you to love me like you love them Reach out your hand pretend your my friend. ARE YOU LISTENING? DEAR LORD, THE HOLY GHOST AND SAVIOR I don't even need to wait I'm in tune with your choices and in synch with your behavior Im pulling my hand away from reaching out to you Do you even care? Are you even there? I guess all that crap about loving us loving me was a lie I'd be best if we end this uncontrollable relationship, So i'll just see you when I die.
