A few days ago, I wrote a poem about my lover... critiques?

It's called "Ode to Matt 1".

Why must you be so complex
I will always be here, rain or shine
You aren't always what I expect
But at times with you I'm on Cloud Nine
At times you give me affection
At times you reschedule to a different date
Some times I feel we need a correction
In our relationship, it's never too late
(Chorus)

Friendship is like marriage
2 people make it work
Do things together, like ride a carriage
And both of us are pro-change like FW De Klerk
(Chorus)

Chorus
Over the past few weeks
I've processed the fact you may want me
If it's true, Venus, the Goddess of Love speaks
And if it's not I acted very stupidly
But why did you mock me
Why did you break up with her?
She seemed so nice until ending things romantically
You're so very complicated my good sir
If you're not what I think you are
I'm sorry for being so nosy
But it happens, and friends or lovers we'll go far
And as either I love you, like a pretty posy

Bridge
I wanna ask you so much
If you're into me, like I'm into you
If you are, then act as such
But don't be so complicated, please be true
Because

Repeat chorus 2 times
End

 

Thanks! Should I give it to him for Christmas or as a friendship present? Besides, he is my crush and the love of my life... seriously.
And I think he likes me! (See Support and Advice)