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Final Report for School

Discussion in 'Current Events, World News, & LGBT News' started by mydogstewie, May 24, 2010.

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  1. mydogstewie

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    Hopefully it sends a message:

     
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  3. Lady Gaga

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    I agree, it's fantastic.

    The fact that you used perfect grammar is just..amazing. You're 15, I help a teacher in her senior class looking over papers for grammar issues, and I swear 90% of them write like this:

    well in the old days people whoud go to the mall and fight and buy and eat

    Now, of course that is just a random example, not intended to make sense. But you get my point.

    What you said, was amazing.

    How you set it up, was amazing.

    A+ :grin:
     
  4. mydogstewie

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    Thank you, I hate bad grammar, I always double and triple check for all grammar mistakes haha

    Thanks again :grin:
     
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    Are you going to use correct formatting on the final version? Sources and Works Cited and etc? You should.
     
  6. mydogstewie

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    Yeah, it's double spaced, correct mla works cited and stuff
     
  7. Shevanel

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    So you edited the format for us? xD
     
  8. mydogstewie

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    No, I just don't know how to do double spaced
     
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    Nah, I mean citing within the paper at the appropriate points and stuff, around quotes and stuff.
     
  10. mydogstewie

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    I did...I haven't finished though but there are some in there

     
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    Okay, Good :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
     
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    This is exceptional. I applaud your writing skills.
     
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    Dude good stuff. The massage came home load and clear. I was so close to tears. Powerful stuff. Just error proof before u send it out, I noticed some spelling errors. This is a must read.
     
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    Massage? Oh the irony.
     
  15. Myke

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    Loud* you* lol

    Awesome report! You really did a good job on it. I started reading it and wasn't expecting it to be that long lol.
     
  16. It's wonderful, man! I think you did a fantastic job on it. It's nice to see that other young people like to spell right and use proper grammar. I'm glad I'm not the only one. :slight_smile:
     
  17. Fargo

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    Great job! However, some constructive criticism is that some ideas seemed incomplete and occasionally left you wondering. However, other than that, fantastic job! =)
     
  18. mydogstewie

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    Alright, I'm waiting on a grade for the paper, but I got a 93% on the powerpoint presentation so hopefully the paper will be higher.

    During my presentation I said, "How is it that in school, if I say the N-word, I get suspended, but when I say (I yelled these) Faggot, Homo, Dyke, Flamer, nothing happens?"

    People laughed at that part, I was so upset. They videotaped it on their phones and posted it on facebook to laugh at me
     
  19. Jiggles

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    (*hug*) Its kind of proving your point there! People are so immature sometime. If it gets too bad for you, you can report it to facebook then they might remove it.
     
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