third poem hope you all enjoy I close my hands my face is wet are these tears going to be of regret? Who I am? What is it I am? I no longer care I just want out. Out of this life of lies I’m living in out of this pain and sin. I take my first step why am I afraid and ashamed for this the choice I have never ever made. No matter how dashing and flashing they are no man will ever have this part of my heart. I’ve started it, but am I ready? But it’s too late to go back in. Some will hate, some will push me to change my ways, but a few will never change and treat me the same. I have now opened the door to the world, so please don’t hate me now im out. This is not my fault and cannot change, do you think I would chose a life of political ridicule. I’ve tried to change hide away, hate myself for feeling this way. For the past few years I have been fighting on my own, please the last thing now is too fell alone. I’m the same girl I was before, I’m basically not lying to you now. If our world were swapped, I know in my heart id stand by you. Having said this, it’s with a plea I will end, Please find it in your heart to keep being my friend.
First question, is it on purpose that you write 'peom' as title? The content is beautiful and very true But you could structurize it that it can be read a bit liquider (or is it 'more liquid'?)
