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poem 4 - not sure of a name

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by AJ2014, Apr 27, 2014.

  1. AJ2014

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    ive posted 3 others and i hope you all enjoy this one - if anyone has an idea what i can call it it would b much appreciated

    Have you noticed the signs?
    Will this be unexpected?
    Or are you already suspecting?

    I hope I don’t get hate,
    as this is something I can’t hide,
    this is me, and I can’t change.

    But please don’t be scared,
    I’m still the same it’s just now I’ve shared,
    I’ve aired, I’ve declared.

    This isn’t a phase so don’t be rude,
    don’t think I can change to fit with you,
    please don’t scream in disapprove,

    As I was scared to come out to you.
    but now I have support and I know I will get through,
    they are there for me like I hope some of you will to.

    For this is my secret and it’s been the hard to keep,
    but this is who I am and I want to be free,
    be myself and not have to lie, be who I wanna be.

    Some of you will walk away in disapprove,
    and that’s fine, feel that way,
    but please don’t discriminate.

    But most of you I hope will be the same,
    the ones I’ve told don’t think I should feel shame,
    because I haven’t changed just because you now know, I’m gay.
     
  2. TheStudent

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    I can't help you with a name as I'm terrible at naming things but I just wanted to say that I think it's really good.
     
  3. CharlsOn

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    Hard way to say.
    Coming out.
    No change, much change.
    Different but equal.
    Would be some opportunities:grin:
    Another good poem!:slight_smile:
     
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    "I haven't changed." :slight_smile:
     
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    That's a good one!:grin:
     
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    Omg! That's really good!! I would have called it "F*** Narnia" or something :grin: Just kidding! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: But the ones mentioned above are pretty good! Like the one Mirko suggested...I like that one a lot :slight_smile:
     
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    Thanks all "I haven't changed" sounds good