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Poem

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Young Blood, Apr 30, 2014.

  1. Young Blood

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    So I saw someone else post a couple poems, so I thought I would make a little contribution :slight_smile: I know it may not be very good, but hey it's something I like doing :slight_smile: So here's to others who love poetry like me :slight_smile: I'm all for constructive criticism too so anything you want to say that may improve it is awesome!! :slight_smile: Otherwise, enjoy! :slight_smile:

    The Invisibles

    The shadows that dwell
    Taking up space
    Of those that fell
    And couldn't keep the pace.

    Left to rust
    In the dark
    Left to the dust
    And to the dogs that bite and bark.

    The red, the blue,
    the green, and the butterflies,
    We have them too,
    The lows and the highs.

    But they don't see
    They're busy with the things they do
    They can't see what we can be
    They can't see we're fucking people too!
     
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    That's good!!!:slight_smile:
    I like the ending! And you're absolutely right!!!
     
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    Lol! :lol: Thanks cutie pie :slight_smile:
     
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    You're very welcome!!!:wink: