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I tried writing a song.

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by thesharkamander, May 11, 2014.

  1. thesharkamander

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    It's called "Heal."

    Broken, beat down,
    Lost and so alone,
    Looking for some place
    You can call a home,
    Somewhere you can go,

    And heal.
    Wrap your wounds, and dry your tears.
    You're safe now,
    Guarded from your darkest fears.
    So close your eyes,
    And dream again.
    You'll wake stronger than you've ever been.

    Rest your heart now,
    Mend your broken soul.
    I'm here with you;
    I'll protect you from the cold,
    Give you somewhere you can go,

    And heal.
    Wrap your wounds, and dry your tears.
    You're safe now,
    Guarded from your darkest fears.
    So close your eyes,
    And dream again.
    You'll wake stronger than you've ever been.

    The pain of now won't always last.
    Your scars will fade into the past,
    So hold on and we'll make it through
    To somewhere safe and somewhere new.

    And heal.
    Wrap your wounds, and dry your tears.
    You're safe now,
    Guarded from your darkest fears.
    So close your eyes,
    And dream again.
    You'll wake stronger than you've ever been.

    Heal.
    Wrap your wounds, and dry your tears.
    You're safe now,
    Guarded from your darkest fears.
    So close your eyes,
    And dream again.
    You are stronger than you've ever been.
     
  2. Argentwing

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    You should sing it on #######! Usually songs as long as yours with as much lyrical variety are pretty freaking great.
     
  3. Holdingb

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    Still prefer "We Can't Stop" Trololol

    Real impressive though o: A lot better than anything I've heard on the radio! ^^
     
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    Wow nice! I right songs myself too, but I can't sing lol, so I wish you much luck!!
     
  5. thesharkamander

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    Thanks. If I get the opportunity to record it, I will, but my mom is asleep right now and I'd rather not wake her.

    ---------- Post added 11th May 2014 at 11:12 AM ----------

    I actually had to look up what song that was because I'd completely forgotten.

    And thanks. :slight_smile:

    ---------- Post added 11th May 2014 at 11:21 AM ----------

    That's cool that you also write songs. If you ever post any, I'll read them. :slight_smile: And thank you!
     
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    ####### | Voice message
    My voice isn't the best and neither is my mic, but hey, here it is.

    At the end of the chorus you can always hear me running out of breath... >.<; Also tell me if I accidentally copied the tune from anything.
     
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    Tried singing it in a country style. Lol. But I am not a real good singer nor do I know much about rhythm, tho I like these type of songs. Good job on writing a song, tho. :slight_smile:
     
  8. thesharkamander

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    Heh, I'd kinda like to hear a country version of this song. :grin: Glad ya like it.
     
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    I have written several songs but I refuse to post them here because some of you might steal my ideas/lyrics and make millions :wink:.

    Btw, I sang your song in my head and I really liked it, good job :thumbsup: *steals song* lol.
     
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    Wow, this is amazing:grin:
     
  11. thesharkamander

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    *holds song close* Swiper, no swiping, Swiper no swiping!
    Good to know that you like it, though. :slight_smile:
     
  12. thesharkamander

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    Thank you. ^^
     
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    You need a good beat more than anything. An a capella song wont do to well. Try rock mixed with alternative like BURN IT DOWN or CASTLE OF GLASS, both by LINKIN PARK.
     
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    Yeah, I'll work on the instruments. Thanks for the genre suggestion.