This one I wrote a couple months back, and it's based off reality. _______________ You leaned in, and your bright blue eyes were lit with hunger and I heard my name, because you whispered it to me as your lips moved against mine And you left me breathless. The next day, when we talked, all I could do was replay this kiss over and over in my mind, and when you said something, I would Imagine your lips moving against mine And I was left breathless. It was so odd, knowing your bright blue eyes and your lips have never met mine, and that you couldn't know how badly I wanted this dream to be true.
I've been writing on and off since I was five, but I don't write that often. Anyway, I have another poem I wrote two days ago which I'll post here the minute I get home tonight :icon_bigg
It's a really nice poem, and I liked the way you ended it, and not giving it away until the last line.
