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  1. Ryujin

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    Hey! I draw an amateur Comic strip called "The Meta Files" and I have just uploaded most of the comics for the first time on to the Internet in an album on my profile.
    If you don't mind, it would be nice if you would look at them and then I could get some feedback.

    The comic is here

    What do you think?

    Thanks in advance!
     
    #1 Ryujin, Aug 22, 2014
  2. Leonardo

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    I likes it. Muchly. But you already know that :grin:
     
    #2 Leonardo, Aug 22, 2014
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    I like it but having trouble reading some of the words
     
    #3 CandyKing, Aug 22, 2014
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    Are there any you want me to transcribe? As soon as i can I will get some better pictures up!
     
    #4 Ryujin, Aug 22, 2014
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    You coud make then darker, bigger, and in print.
     
    #5 CandyKing, Aug 22, 2014
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    I actually really like it! Or at least most of the bits I could read :slight_smile: You could put a transcript in the comments or description of each picture of what it says?

    ---------- Post added 23rd Aug 2014 at 06:14 PM ----------

    ah seen you've done that for one of them.
     
    #6 CuriousArticles, Aug 23, 2014
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    I found it to be nice, however I think that you should try to work a little bit more on your penmanship and/or making the comic closer so that way I could read all of it :grin:. Otherwise, I think that it's fairly good :slight_smile:.
     
    #7 Candace, Aug 23, 2014
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