Ok, so I'm arranging the Christmas carol In Dulci Jubilo for me and a bunch of my friends to sing at our college's Christmas concert. Thing is, I wanted to have it all in English because the others will get confused if they have to sing in Latin or German. So with this in mind I have put together an altered (but still faithful to the original) set of words for us to sing. Could anyone who is familiar with the original tune/lyrics or just likes musical stuff please cast a critical eye over it? Grammar, rhyming, meaning etc.
