Songwriters: Use this thread to write your own song

Here's mine:

This goes out to all those homosexual men out there

(spoken)
Everyday, I'm feeling alone
I keep wondering where the world has gone
I look up at the stars
And I see someone who is lessening my pain

(beat starts up)
Everyone is who they want to be
Going wherever in the world
I fly so far above the sea
I am feeling so swirled

(Yeah) I am calling to you
(You know what) I don't want no woman
All I want is a man
I want to feel his touch
I want to feel his clutch
On my hairy skin

(rapped)
I might be a man
But I'm part of the clan
(what clan) The gay clan
Yeah Yeah Yeah
Now turn up the music

(Sung)
Oh yeah
We got to turn off all the lights
Because there have been far too many lonely nights
It don't matter anymore

(Chorus)
I am gay and proud
Nothing can change it around
I want to love a man
I want to do what I can
To help my brothers and sisters


(Sung)
Everyday is a path to love
I want to feel you on top of me
All the voices from above
Are saying this is who you want to be

I feel your touch
You run your fingers down my body
I want your kiss to be a moment in the clutch
I don't care if your shoddy

Because this is my first time
I've never kissed a man before
Its a huge mountain to climb
We'll deal with our own war

Because
(Chorus)
We are gay and proud
And nothing can change it around
I'm in love with a man
I'll let him do what he can
To help my brothers and sisters
All around the world

(Rapped)
This ain't the truth
You're a troubled youth
You see homosexuality is a sin
It'll be a lesser win
Cause even though you're happy
You're life will be crappy
(sung)
Cause you are going to hell
You made a sell
With the devil himself

(Sung)
I say you don't know anything
Because you are blinded by hate
Looking at my rainbow ring
We say open the gate
Let us be so free
Free to be the people who we really are
Climbing up the life tree
Cause It's never just me
It is the future

(Chorus 1)(followed by Chorus 2) x 2


(talked)
You see homophobia is wrong
It always has been
Men and Men can go together because there is history
So can the women do the same
In fact everyone should accept that the world ain't so black and white after all.

(End Song)

Song is pop version of song I want to make called Gay and Proud.

---------- Post added 27th Nov 2014 at 12:47 PM ----------

Also what do you guys think of this song(honest opinions please)

 

I guess no one likes it, okay well I'm not good at writing song lyrics. This is a lame song yeah, I suck pretty much and that's the entire truth, but hey it's not going to stop me from doing this although I suck at writing songs.

 

That song was legitimately from the heart and it may not sound the best, but it is from the heart so therefore it's going to have a bit more emotion than other songs I write. I can write all different sorts of songs.