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My written songs: Feel free to take a look and comment

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Justinian20, Nov 27, 2014.

  1. Justinian20

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    (This Feeling)

    From the time I was young
    I have always felt so strange
    A man walks by and I feel so strung
    I just want to change

    Who I am
    I don't wanna feel like this
    I always have felt this way
    So I'm sailing out of the bay

    (Chorus)
    I never wanted to have this feeling
    I know I'm gay but I don't want to be
    I want to reach for the ceiling
    And just be normal

    Everyday I walk by the trees
    A man walks by and I watch him
    He doesn't know what he sees
    I stare so deeply in his eyes
    I think I'm into guys

    I can feel the pain
    I feel it in my brain
    I never wanted to be this way
    Maybe it's time I accepted I was gay

    Oh yeah, bring it on
    I've never had feelings for girls
    From as far as I've known
    I can watch a dress twirl
    But, I don't feel in love

    (Chorus) x 2

    Ma what is this feeling
    Because I don't want it
    I don't don't want it
    Oh no I don't want it anymore
    It makes me feel so abnormal

    Pain
    Love for a man
    I've never felt accepted
    Oh god please don't make me like this

    (Rap)
    Acceptance is the first step ahead
    There ain't no point in crying in bed
    Cause you are gay
    You've always been that way
    Those feelings are who you are
    So, C'mon man get in the car
    We gonna take you to a gay bar
    So you can see all the men
    Who have come out the pen
    You'll begin to realize
    That you ain't never alone.

    (Sung)
    I have always been alone
    My heart is turning to stone
    Oh no

    (Rapped)
    Why you feeling so down
    You're a prince with a crown
    You're the king with a palace
    You like the phallus
    And you're always gonna have that feeling

    (Chorus) x 2

    (Music dies down as song ends).
     
  2. Damien

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    Hi Justinian,
    it's healing and cathartic to put your feelings on paper, or into a song. Good work. I do the same myself regularly. Sometimes, when I can't find any solution to a problem, I just sit down at the piano, muck around with some chords, and work out a melody that expresses how I feel.
     
  3. kenethtes

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    And that summarizes my life :slight_smile: anyway u have done a good job,with nicely rhyming words and comprehensive stanzas. :eusa_clap