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Gay vampire book

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by vampireboy56, Nov 7, 2008.

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    Ok...Im not a really great writer and this is my first draft of it so if you want to read it...just respond and I'll get it to you
     
  2. I wanna read! I've actually thought about writing a story about just that. Great minds think alike, eh? Are you just getting it out there, or do you want editing/constructive criticism/comments/etc?
     
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  4. Okay, will do. As long as you promise it's not a giant run-on sentence paragraph. In that case I'd have to find you and kill you. Actually, more likely I'd kill myself.
     
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    I need some puncuation help...but that's what the next draft will be free of puncuation errors, and when I do finish editing....itll all be better
     
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    ...its not graphic and there's no sex....until the sequel...:slight_smile:
     
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    there are some guys with no shirts on, kissing which leads to shirts being taken off
    but there is some gore
     
  8. Yay gore. Sexy gore?
     
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    no no no no
    Violence Gore....
     
  10. Sexy, violent gore?
     
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    no like his ribs are cracked, his shin bone is kicked and broken, he smashes a window with his hands, so his hands get sliced, he gets dragged through a windsheiild, then he vomits blood...so not very sexy
     
  12. Oh. You're right, that's not very sexy at all.
     
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    yeah. the sequel however is going to have this really really hot sex scene
     
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    the first one has a hot makeout scene
     
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  16. Gore-y make out?