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"Amateur" song writers (put your lyrics here if you want people's opinion)

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  1. majorburt

    majorburt
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    I haven't seen any threads like this, so I figured I'd make one.

    If your posting lyrics, put what you have and try your best to describe the "sound" so we don't automatically put it in a k-pop tempo lol

    If you are good with an instrument, post a vid or a link to the audio in if you have a sample. I'd love to hear it!


    Also, no stealing of songs from other people without asking them first. This should go without saying, but I figured I would anyway lol.
    your all good people, so I don't think that should be an issue.

    Anyway, enjoy!
     
    #1 majorburt, Mar 12, 2015
  2. Hizaki

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    I'll throw some things up here when I'm home! :icon_bigg
     
    #2 Hizaki, Mar 12, 2015
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    I'm so bad at songwriting! X) I wish I was better. How do you guys stay original and steer away from accidental or blatant copying of already-released songs?
     
    #3 RemakeJake, Mar 13, 2015
  4. majorburt

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    Seeing as vanilla ice got famous for blatantly stealing from another band, I'd say us "songwriters" here don't have much of a problem lol
     
    #4 majorburt, Mar 14, 2015
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    This song its laid-back and played with a ukulele c:

    Chorus:
    I love you
    I know you love me, too
    And this feeling i have is something new

    And with you i feel so alive
    But without you im dead inside
    Dont you know i need you by my side?

    Verse 1:
    I see that you're
    Something unique
    And your love is all
    All that i seek

    And your eyes are what
    What i adore
    And your smile is what
    What i adore and...

    [Chorus]

    Verse 2:
    Why would you choose
    Someone like me?
    Far from perfect I
    I am to be

    I dont deserve
    Someone like you
    Cause sometimes i break
    Break your heart in two

    But sometimes i try
    To show you
    You're my love and l'll
    Never forget you

    [Chorus]

    ---------- Post added 14th Mar 2015 at 08:42 PM ----------

    its supposed to be a simple song... nothing so amazing or anything soo... yeah /.\ my poems are way deeper xD
     
    #5 MonsterAnarchy, Mar 14, 2015
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    Much to happy and lovey... An laid back...
     
    #6 Ryu, Mar 16, 2015
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    you can never be too happy and laid back! lol
     
    #7 majorburt, Mar 24, 2015
  8. NingyoBroken

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    I'm not posting my songs here. They are very "underground" type dark songs with influences of kote kei, post punk and some traditional Japanese sounds. It's not for everyone. I also have a bit of a fear of someone stealing them.
    But yeah, I am a singer-songwriter and plan to be a musician in the future.
     
    #8 NingyoBroken, Mar 24, 2015
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