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My song lyrics

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Justinian20, May 5, 2015.

  1. Justinian20

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    Just look at this song.

    1. These Feelings(I Don’t Want Them Anymore)
    (sings)
    I was left feeling so vulnerable
    Wasting away in the ocean
    These feelings are so damn incurable
    I wish I had a love potion

    To make someone fall in love with me
    I just want to release all my emotion
    I think he’ll disagree
    My thoughts are moving in slow motion

    (Chorus)
    These Feelings are so strong
    These Feelings they last too long
    I don’t want them anymore
    No I don’t want them anymore

    All I wanted was a man to be close to me
    But the odds are one in a million
    So I’ll never be on the committee
    I’m just another stupid civilian

    If this was just a game
    I wouldn’t be going insane
    But I feel like I’m to blame
    Being alive feels so inhumane

    (Chorus)
    These Feelings are so strong
    These Feelings, they last too long
    I don’t want them anymore
    No I don’t ever want them anymore

    My body can’t focus no more
    I think I’m falling in love
    The feelings are gonna tear apart my core
    Am I ready to push and shove

    No, I’m not ready for all of this
    Everybody just wants to cause me pain
    I just want to float away right into the abyss
    Staring across the empty plain

    I feel so damn lonely
    Everyone has been taken
    I’m never gonna be a guy’s one and only
    My world seems to be forsaken

    (Chorus)
    These Feelings are so strong
    These Feelings, they last too long
    I don’t want them anymore
    No, I goddamn don’t want them anymore

    Is this really my destiny
    To be forever alone
    My life is a tragedy
    My heart is so blown

    Whoooa
    Please don’t let me be alone
    Don’t make me feel this way
    What can I do to atone
    I’m just born to play

    (Chorus)
    These Feeling are so strong
    These Feelings, they last too long
    I don’t want them anymore
    No please I don’t want them anymore.

    Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh,

    (sings)
    I never wanted to be like this
    It’s just how I am born
    All I do is reminisce
    My heart is so damn torn.

    Oooooh No No
    Please Don’t make me feel like this
    No Don’t make me feel like this
    Because

    (Chorus)
    These Feelings are so strong
    These Feelings, They last too long
    I don’t want them anymore
    No please take then away cause I don’t want them anymore

    No I don’t want them anymore
    Oh just take them
    Cause I don’t want them

    Oh no
    Whoooooooa

    I’m crying so deeply into the night
    No don’t make me feel so weak
    The light isn’t shining bright
    I’m such a goddamn freak

    (Two men arguing as the song fades)

    No No cause I don’t want these Feelings
    No more please don’t cause me pain
    You are not my lover
    I’ve already got a boyfriend.
    Get away from me you freak

    (Softly sings)
    All I want is to feel your touch
    Against my skin
    I think it’s a little too much
    When is life gonna really begin


    So I want you guys to rate these lyrics and just tell me if you think I'm talented at writing song lyrics. (These are my own original lyrics.) Not copied at all.
     
  2. Justinian20

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    Do you guys think this song is too sad. I understand.