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Something I wrote

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Derek the Wolf, Dec 23, 2008.

  1. Derek the Wolf

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    It's a poem. Tell me if you like it. First version.

    Show yourself at only your will,
    While we wait below holding still,
    More than just simple worldly thrill,
    In awe of your beauty.

    Staring on your heavenly glow,
    Sitting with Earth lying so low,
    Feel we both paradise and woe,
    We yearn for your beauty.

    Hold in the night and give us light,
    That our golden eyes may have sight,
    And our passion you still excite,
    Thank you for your beauty.

    Give us strength and continued love,
    But forgive us Luna, we must move,
    So with one more howl we will prove,
    Love of you, your beauty.

    Through the darkness we carry on,
    And you leave us with just the sun,
    From the new day’s mist we will run,
    ‘Till next month, your beauty.
     
  2. Trystan

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    that's pretty cool, I like it
    good theme too. I take it it's were wolves...? They're awesome
     
  3. wherewulfe

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    hhhmm, i take your part of the were group?
     
  4. Trystan

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    who, me? I would be if I knew there was one. Where is it?
    But I'd be part of the vampyre group too, and I guess that's not allowed...

    ^ ignore all that if you weren't talking to me lol :grin:
     
  5. Derek the Wolf

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    No, I'm not a were. Nowere *snickers* does this poem mention shapeshifting. If you think it does, read again, more carefully.
     
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    oh no, I forgot, people emotions/behaviour/etc are all affected by the moon aren't they?
     
  7. Derek the Wolf

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    Well I'm not going to interpret the poem for you. If you wanna know the "right" interpretation then PM me. I won't post it publicly. :thumbsup: