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My poem about me.

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Holynava17, Apr 10, 2009.

  1. Holynava17

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    This is a required test grade from my English class, before I read it aloud to everyone, i'd like to preview it here first =)




    The world is on fire, don't you see!?
    I've gotta live, gotta move, gotta see, and I gotta be!
    Let me go while i'm still young and bold,
    I've got one chance before I grow old!

    "Need to keep moving, Gotta stay free,"
    That's my rule; My holy Cree!
    This lifes to short, You need to let go.
    Your in life's stream so just let it flow!

    Live your life proud, stand tall and sing!
    I'll say this loud, and I'll let it ring!
    I am not timid, nor am I shy!
    I might not, but I'll definately try.

    I will not fail, and I'll tell you why!
    I will live, and I will thrive!
    I will fly, oh will I fly!
    I will not have limits, not even the sky!

    The World is on fire, don't you see!?
    The world is mine, and I am free!
    Just you wait, you will see!
    This life is mine, just for me!​
     
  2. riddlerno1

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    oh wow, thats really good!
     
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    pretty!! i live it!! :grin:
     
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    wonderful job, I like it:slight_smile:
     
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    Wow, that is awesome! That would make a great song