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My latest entry: THE ONE

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by notsurewhy, Aug 19, 2012.

  1. notsurewhy

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    I might not be the one

    to whom you shall give your hands.

    I might not be the one

    whose shadow shall walk by your shadow.

    I might not be the one

    who occupies your heart.

    the one

    who crosses your mind.

    I might not, might not...

    But wait...

    ...If some day,... however upset you might be

    Think of me...

    whenever you are sad.

    Come see me...

    every time you feel alone.

    Because

    I will always be there

    Promise!

    I would be the one

    whose shoulder, on which you shall cry.
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    ..
    ...
    English is not my first language. So if there are any mistakes, please let me know. Tks!
     
  2. Gen

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    Well, I think that it is nice :eusa_clap. Especially for english not being you first language. Its simple, but has a very important and positive message. You should definitely keep writing.
     
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    :slight_smile: Very nice.