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Old 19th Aug 2012, 10:00 AM   #1
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Default My latest entry: THE ONE

I might not be the one

to whom you shall give your hands.

I might not be the one

whose shadow shall walk by your shadow.

I might not be the one

who occupies your heart.

the one

who crosses your mind.

I might not, might not...

But wait...

...If some day,... however upset you might be

Think of me...

whenever you are sad.

Come see me...

every time you feel alone.

Because

I will always be there

Promise!

I would be the one

whose shoulder, on which you shall cry.
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English is not my first language. So if there are any mistakes, please let me know. Tks!
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Old 19th Aug 2012, 01:56 PM   #2
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Default Re: My latest entry: THE ONE

Well, I think that it is nice . Especially for english not being you first language. Its simple, but has a very important and positive message. You should definitely keep writing.
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Old 19th Aug 2012, 03:02 PM   #3
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Coolio!
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Old 3rd Sep 2012, 12:41 PM   #4
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Thanks!!
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Old 3rd Sep 2012, 01:22 PM   #5
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Very nice.
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