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Poem

Discussion in 'Entertainment and Technology' started by Kuroi, Sep 28, 2012.

  1. Kuroi

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    Rain is falling,
    I can't cry,
    My share of crying
    Is done by sky

    Rain is falling,
    I'm alone,
    For the first time in life,
    Demons turned to stone

    Rain is falling,
    I can see,
    My reflected Image
    Finally showing me

    Rain is falling
    Soak the ground!
    Oh how much I love,
    That mayestic sound

    Rain is falling
    I am free,
    Rain is falling
    I am me

    Rain is falling
    So am I,
    rain is dying,
    so will I

    Thought this would be the right place to post it.
    As an amature writter I would like to hear your thoughts
     
  2. Mirko

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    The poem captures emotions quite well. I think it reads beautifully.
     
  3. Kuroi

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    Thank you