What do you think of this song I'm writing?

I like it. I don't know anything about the mechanics of music, so I can't give you any guitar notes and that, but as an average listener I say well done. It was pretty, soft. Dark without being heavy. I was expecting some speedy, loud chaotic all over the place riff, but instead it was drawn out, steady, melodic in a way. Didn't have anything to prove, it was more about the actual sound instead of how fast you could move your fingers. You know what I mean or am I talking in circles? haha Anyway, that happens to be more my taste, so I enjoyed it.

 

Maybe turn off distortion and run it clean, distortion seems to give it a sort of western feel and it needs to go somewhere, if it's just this it'll get really boring but yeah! keep with it