So I wrote these lyrics....

What do you think? I think after rewriting it 40314902319 times they're at their best level

They are bound to the Earth like trees
Suffocating under the weight of an icy grave
Reaching to be free, but only their limbs are seen
Hoping that one day someone will see:
They can't escape with lacerated wings

The ocean surrounds me, covering everything
Nothing will be clearly seen; confusion overwhelming
No-one can save you, you're on your own, left to die
Manipulating every bleeding heart you can find
I can't escape with lacerated wings.

Swarms of nets, waves of screams
Entangle: your captive illusions and dreams
The mask has be seared - The truth now they see
The Liar - Vampiric Fiend; lowly thief
And now they know you can't escape with Lacerated Wings

There's reasons for your rejections:
Your Heavy heart's transferred oppression
The scars are too deep to pass the trials
But you can find peace in your cage of empty spirals
You Cannot Escape With Lacerated Wings

 

Thanks I actually do love that album; they're a big influence on me, they got me started in music

---------- Post added 24th Mar 2013 at 08:41 AM ----------

I'm not really in a band, but I do play guitar (not well), sing, write music, and I recently ordered a tin whistle, which I want to add to my music to sound more folk/Celtic. I do have my own project (I guess that's what you call it) called Illian, and I plan to make a demo for it, called Relics of Fear. I already know what songs are going to be in it, and all the lyrics are written. About one song is almost done out of the 5