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if you got this poem what would you think?

Discussion in 'Family, Friends, and Relationships' started by TB8, Nov 4, 2013.

  1. TB8

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    okay so i gave this girl a poem who i have a crush on the poem was on a candygram well if you got a poem like this what would you think?
    ''stars are yellow
    pumpkins are oranges
    halloween has past but in my imagination i saw you
    under the moon ''BOO!'' You made my heart skip a beat But
    even so you are my halloween dream!"

    i know its not good but if you got a poem like this would you think its stupid,dumb,cute,or just no,or good?:icon_redf not really good at these things :rolle:
     
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    I would think it's a little late, a little corny, and kind of sweet! Someone thinking of me that way would be a treat.
     
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    I think this is very cute!! I'm not any good with this stuff either so usually I use lyrics from different songs that convey what I feel (I know unoriginal) but I lack creativity when righting poetry. So I give you a big thumbs up!! :thumbsup:
    Like I said it was cute and I would have been flattered. :slight_smile:
     
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    I think I would be almost fatally charmed if I were to read something so sweet that was written just for me...she'll love it, well done!
     
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    The corn-factor is absolutely through the roof, but everyone knows the judge of a good love-poem is the density of the corniness in the poem, so I have to say that scientifically-speaking, it's amazing! Super-cute!
     
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    If I got it from someone I was into, I think it would be one of the cutest things in the world. :icon_mrgr