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[The Other] Haiku, Tanka Game [Poetry Game]

Discussion in 'Fun and Games' started by InaRut, Feb 22, 2008.

  1. InaRut

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    One write a Haiku
    5 syllables
    7 syllables
    5 syllables

    Next person responds with a tanka
    5 Syllables
    7 Syllables
    5 Syllables

    7 Syllables
    7 Syllables

    (Correct me if I'm wrong please, I have a feeling that isn't right)

    Then you write a new Haiku to be responded to by the next poster.

    I'll start.

    Broken flower fall
    grounded he shall lay so still
    This winter is cold.

    :eusa_danc have fun!
     
  2. KatoKumi

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    I don't comprehend
    Should we really write haikus
    I feel this will suck
     
  3. InaRut

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    You cheeky bastard :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

    Just write a Tanka to match the Haiku above.
    Just write what you think my little blurb means to you (in form of a tanka).
    *Shrugs*
    It's just for fun.

    Like the Limmericks thread only Japanese
     
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    I do understand
    Haikus, however tankas
    still escape knowledge.
     
  5. InaRut

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    Tanka is the response to a Haiku. The syllable format is the same it's just longer.

    So it's like I write a Haiku about anything and then you write a response poem to that in tanka form
    5
    7
    5

    7
    7

    So Tanka's are like your writing the second part.
    So if I wrote about a dog
    You could write about the tricks he knew..

    Get it?