I wrote the girl I love a poem in hopes that it'll express how I feel. Is that corny? I don't know how she feels about me but I want so bad to be her Prince(ss) charming. She's been through a lot of heart ache through her life and I just want to take care of her.
That's so lovely. It may be corny but there is nothing wrong with that. In a modern world where communication is often reduced to short texts and messages, we need more heart felt connections like letters and poetry. Don't be ashamed of wanting to express yourself in a meaningful way, she is a lucky girl. Good luck (*hug*)
Poems aren't corny. Vesalius is right; expression in written words is a rarer art than it used to be. She'll love it. <3
It may seem corny to you, but it's not. I know I will love to get a poem from someone. I think it's very sweet and lovely. I'm sure she'll love it (And I hope that she will feel the same way about you and that you will be very happy together)